Tuesday, July 28, 2009

Flutter

With the monsoon clouds
tucked behind your ear,
piling away more that await
to see themeslves in your eyes,
You sit there not knowing
if I still breathe.

And I,
the one who kisses
the ground your breath touches
still long for the day
you shall see in the corner of your eye,
what a mere flutter does to me...

3 Comments:

Anonymous Ritwik Banerjee said...

You have no idea how beautiful this poem is. It is two stanza of undulating and silent emotions; and how elegantly you expose it in these lines.

It's like looking at a sublme photograph of the ocean waves ... and then, suddenly, the last line splashes onto the reader.

2:24 PM  
Blogger Sir Tawkalot said...

it is almost spiritual for me to understand how these words form in your mind.

11:19 AM  
Blogger legspace said...

clap clap!

4:48 AM  

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